I've been tackling the big job of editing the sequel to A Home for Phoebe. I wrote the rough draft for NaNoWriMo about 5 years ago, and now it's time to polish it up. I hope you enjoy this excerpt of Phoebe making friends with someone who really needs one.
(Background: Phoebe had borrowed a book from the minister's wife. She set it down on the school step at recess time. When the bell rang, it was gone! Phoebe knows books are valuable and wonders how she will be able to buy another one to replace it.
The Kittles, a poor and wild family, have moved into the community. Delly Kittle doesn't seem to want to make friends with anyone. Phoebe suspects she took the book, but she's not sure.)
DELLY AND THE MISSING BOOK
It was raining when Phoebe woke up on Monday morning. Zeke drove her to school in the covered buggy that they usually only used for
Sundays. The gray clouds hung so low, you could hardly see the rooster wind
vane on the top of the barn. The cold rain blew in the sides, so they still got
wet. They waved good-bye to Zeke and raced up the school steps.
The air in the coat room
smelled musty and damp. Slick mud covered the floor boards. The pot-bellied
stove was pumping out as much heat as it could to the circle of shivering
children. Miss Edgecomb tapped her ruler on her desk and everyone scattered to
their desks. Phoebe noticed that none of the Kittles were there.
The rain pelted the window
panes and roof making it hard to hear anyone read or recite. The warm stove
made the room feel safe and cozy from the fierce rainstorm outside. Phoebe’s
eyes felt heavy and she couldn’t concentrate on travels of Magellan. Just as
she felt her head nod, the back door banged open and a scuffle of feet could be
heard.
Everyone turned to see the
Kittle children tumble into the room. They all wore floppy leather hats, but
those must not have been much protection against the blowing rain. They tromped
and sloshed and dripped to their various seats.
“My goodness!” said Miss
Edgecomb. “Did you children walk all the way from your house in this rain? I
didn’t think you’d come today.” She helped Roster Junior remove an oversized
shirt and stood him near the stove. “Take off your wet coats and sweaters and
stand near the stove. You must be freezing. Why didn’t you just stay home
today?”
“Well, tell you father that
if the weather is blustery, you may stay home.”
“I’ll tell him,” said Stafford , “but it don’t matter the weather to
Pop. He don't want us in the house when he’s sleepin’.”
“Hush!” whispered Delly.
“Well, at least you can get
dried off now. Hang your things on my chair here, and stand near the stove to
get warm.”
Miss Edgecomb tried to get
Delly to take off her sweater, but she clutched the front even tighter. Giving
up, Miss Edgecomb said, “Alright children, let’s get back to our studies. Will
the second class come up to the front for their spelling lesson?”
Phoebe tried to return to the
history of Magellan, but she kept looking at Delly and Stafford
and Roster Junior huddled around the stove. (What kind of father would make his
children walk to school on a day like this?) She caught the eye of Delly, who
looked quickly away. Phoebe noticed that her sweater looked square, like there
was something underneath it.
After the spelling lesson,
Miss Edgecomb looked at her watch that hung on a chain around her neck.
“Phoebe, would please help the younger girls to the outhouse and then fetch
their lunch pails to eat in here? We’ll have to have our recess inside today.”
Stella and Jemmy needed their
coats and bonnets to face the blowing storm just to go a few feet to the
outhouse. They each grabbed one of Phoebe’s hands and squealed with glee as she
raced with them across the sloggy yard. The wind whistled through the cracks
and even up the hole. No one liked to dilly-dally in the outhouse, but
especially on a day like today.
Even though the storm meant
being trapped indoors all day, there was an air of excitement and adventure.
Children scurried up and down between the desks. Some of the boys began
leap-frogging over them until Miss Edgecomb promised a sing time. She also
decided to allow them to sit with their friends, instead of the normal assigned
spots. Stella and Jemmy pulled Phoebe to sit with them, and Phoebe squished
next to the little girls. She looked around the room and noticed Delly sitting
alone.
“I’ll sit with you another
time,” she told the little girls. “I promise.”
She stood near Delly’s desk.
“Would you like me to sit with you?”
Delly squinted up at her. “Why would I want that? Maybe I like being alone.”
Phoebe stared at her. Her
eyes stung and her throat felt tight. Her breath came fast and hard. She turned
on her heel and plopped in the bench at her desk. (Grrrr . . . That Delly can be so . . . so . . . difficult! Doesn’t she recognize when someone is trying to be nice?)
Phoebe ate the bread and
cheese and apple pie that Maseppa had packed for her, but it tasted bland and
dry. She loved to sing, but today she just didn’t feel like it. She’d be glad
when Zeke came to pick her up. She lifted the lid
of her desk and froze.
There was the book! The red
coloring from the binding was spreading to her papers. One edge looked smeared,
like mud had been wiped off. She glanced over at Delly, but she was bent over
her desk with intense concentration. She peeked at Phoebe then looked back at
her work.
Miss Edgecomb was collecting
papers from the third class on the other side of the room. Phoebe took the book
and walked quickly to the coat room. She wrapped it in her shawl and put it
under her lunch pail. Just as she was slipping back into her desk, she heard
Miss Edgecomb. “Phoebe Johanson, please sit down and resume your studies.”
“Yes, Miss Edgecomb.”
The schoolroom returned to
the normal sounds of papers and books and chalk. Phoebe glanced over at Delly, who was staring at her. They held each other’s gaze for a few
seconds. Phoebe gave her a small smile, and there was a little twitch at the corner of Delly’s
lips.
Phoebe was glad that Zeke was
there when school let out at three o’clock. She had to ask him something. She ran back
through the stinging raindrops. “Delly, Stafford ,
and Roster, you don’t have to walk home. Zeke said he’d take you home. We’ll
have to squish up, but that’s alright. We’ll stay warmer that way.”
The boys sat on the floor of the buggy, while Delly and Phoebe squeezed
in the seat next to Zeke.
Delly whispered, “How come
you didn’t tell on me about the book?”
“I don’t know. I guess I felt
sorry for you, being all wet and all.”
“My pop got angry somethin’
fierce when he found me readin’ instead of fixin’ some coffee for him, this
mornin’.” She rubbed her hand on her shoulder. “He threw the
book outside in the rain and told us to get out of there and go to school.”
“Really? That’s awful!”
“He’s like that lots of times.”
Phoebe glanced to her left to
see if Zeke was listening. He didn’t seem to be paying
attention to them. Stafford and Roster Jr.
were asking him about Ol’ Sam.
“Phoebe, I wanted to read it
so much. When you put it down, I just couldn’t help myself. I was meanin' to give it
back when I was done, and I almost finished it." Delly smiled. "Which girl did you like best?"
“I liked Jo.”
“I did too!” Her smile turned
down with the memory of the condition of it now. “I’m sorry it got all wet and
muddy. I tried to dry it off. It’s ruined, isn’t it?”
Phoebe sighed. “It probably
is. I can’t give it back to Missus Thompson like that.”
“What are you goin’ to do?”
“I don’t know. I suppose I’ll
have to get another one like it for her.”
Delly’s eyes got big. “Buy
one? How much do books cost?”
“I think they cost about
fifty cents.”
“Fifty whole cents?”
Phoebe sighed. “Yeah, I
wanted to buy one in the new bookstore called Uncle Tom’s Cabin. It cost
fifty cents.” She looked at Delly. “Do
you have any money?”
“Me? No, I had a penny once.
I had to give it to Mama, though, to buy some medicine for Sammy.”
Zeke dropped off the Kittles,
and Delly waved goodbye to Phoebe. Phoebe felt so selfish and ungrateful. She
thought she was so deprived because she didn’t have a real family or any
brothers or sisters. It made her realize how much Maseppa and Zeke loved her
and took care of her. It made her so thankful for her home and the life she
had.
“Zeke?”
“Yes?”
“I’ve got lots of good things
don’t I?”
He smiled at her. “Yup.
You’re doin’ right well.”
~ ~ ~
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4 comments:
Can't wait to read the whole book! Sounds great!
Paula Jones
Wonderfully sweet and comforting. I adore Phoebe, :)
Yeah, Phoebe's got a good heart. She had some good teachers.
Aww, Phoebe is growing up rather well. I'm glad that she wasn't mean to Delly, because you never know what other folks are dealing with. What a fun little excerpt. I hope the editing is going well. :)
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