tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post5882539916307537338..comments2023-10-24T03:02:14.153-04:00Comments on My Back Door: Friday Fiction - "Nando 's Fight"Yvonne Blakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08710596077769759997noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post-3318812311009087582010-08-01T22:24:17.174-04:002010-08-01T22:24:17.174-04:00Vonnie, I'm so distraught about Fernando! I wa...Vonnie, I'm so distraught about Fernando! I want to cry! Where are the adults to step in and help? I want to be there to comfort him. :( <br /><br />Obviously, you got me with this one. Excellent, but sad. I hope you post the next chapter so I can find out what happens!.Catrina Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759918426263780732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post-11365741412320751762010-07-31T22:23:02.898-04:002010-07-31T22:23:02.898-04:00Really good description and the use of short sente...Really good description and the use of short sentences for a younger reader was artfully done!Bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12534649120077490840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post-83632037915742241162010-07-31T21:52:31.724-04:002010-07-31T21:52:31.724-04:00Poor Fernando! oooh, I wanted to whack jose myself...Poor Fernando! oooh, I wanted to whack jose myself for picking on him--great job with the emotion and action.Sara Harricharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07050427684753490067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post-47713652480449540922010-07-30T19:06:47.857-04:002010-07-30T19:06:47.857-04:00I was pulling for Fernando for sure. Good story, V...I was pulling for Fernando for sure. Good story, Vonnie!Lauryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10265391082131639139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post-6934908563202096982010-07-30T18:03:52.112-04:002010-07-30T18:03:52.112-04:00oh wow! You have so much emotion packed into this...oh wow! You have so much emotion packed into this heart-breaking story! Great work, Vonnie!BethLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16437061780974521381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7380730650602813473.post-25856455072853937072010-07-30T13:05:13.571-04:002010-07-30T13:05:13.571-04:00Great job with this story. I feel an emotional att...Great job with this story. I feel an emotional attachment to Fernando, and I want to read more.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709542174278486434noreply@blogger.com